I revised my I-Search paper by revamping my introduction. I wanted to grab the attention of the reader, so I made a few adjustments. I had also made revisions to some of the words I used in my first draft. Sometimes my eyes need a break and I need to come back to my work with a fresh view.
My interview with Mrs. Jessie needed some adjustments because I included too much information the first time. I looked at the rubric and the list that was given to us last Tuesday to make sure I had everything.
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